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New Fic: First Time for Everything (5/10): B/J: NC-17
Happy Spring! The sun is shining and the weather is warming up and the days are getting longer. Perfect excuse for more porny stories :)

Much love to [info]paddies for the new icon (especially since I know you've been very very busy!!!). And many thanks to everyone that's offered their feedback and encouragement. Hope you guys are continuing to enjoy the series!



Title: First Time for Everything
Chapter: 5/10
Previous Chapters: Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4
Justin's POV : NC-17 for coarse language and explicit sex : Set in early Season 1

Premise: Series fic based on [info]paddies request for "the fic of my dreams".
Read her full request.

This is the fifth installment: #5 First threesome

First Time for Everything - Part 5

You slide the door shut behind you as quietly as you can, but it's heavy and loud and you grimace as the clang echoes through the loft. It's not that you think Brian might be asleep or anything, it's just that since you unceremoniously moved in with him (only as a matter of circumstance, you remind yourself), you've been trying to watch your step. The last thing you want to do is encourage another yelling match like last Wednesday when he came home to find you listening to Moby and dancing around in his Prada-Gucci-whatever-the-fuck shirt.

You agree that sometimes your judgment can be less than stellar.

But once you're inside, you smell the smoke and hear the music and you know that someone else is here with him. It's okay, you've come to terms with the idea fact reality that Brian needs to wants to fuck more than just you, so you ignore them and drop your knapsack in the kitchen, poking in the fridge to see if there's anything to eat. You've still got an hour or two left of Algebra homework to do tonight, but you're hungry now, the pizza you and Daph shared at the diner a distant memory.

"Justin?" you hear his voice, heavy with lust and a little ragged, and the sound of it makes your heart jump into your throat. You let the fridge door drop closed and turn on your heel to stare in the direction of the bedroom. The pale outline of bodies is visible through the glass, and you stand still for moments, wondering if you really heard him call you or if you just imagined (hoped) you did. But then his voice echoes your name through the loft again and you kick off your shoes and take the few steps up to the bed.

At first you see ass – the trick's – nice and round and firm and humping the sheets. And then you see Brian's face – eyes at half-mast, lips curled into a smile, dick buried down the trick's throat.

"Hey," you say, face flushing at the sight, pants tightening at the crotch. You don't know where to look – trick's tight ass, Brian's dick disappearing between his lips, the line of sweat slicking down Brian's chest.

"Have fun tonight?" he says, his hand resting on the back of the trick's head.

You nod quickly, eyes flicking across the bed, their bodies, everywhere. "Uh, yeah... um..." you think you know how to speak, but somehow words are kind of not coming out of your mouth right now.

"C'mere," he says, motioning you towards him with outstretched fingers. You take one tentative step, then another, unsure of what he's wanting or expecting... you kneel on the bed beside him, and his fingers wrap up behind your neck, twisting into the short hairs at the base of your skull and pulling you close.

You feel his stuttered breaths against your face, then he brings his lips to yours and kisses you, sucking at your breath as if he hadn't enough of his own. You fall into the kiss readily, aware of the trick sucking his cock, of the presence of someone else in the room, knowing that there are possibilities here that you haven't yet explored, haven't barely imagined, but that you're eager to discover. You want to find out what it's like, what everything is like, and so you kiss Brian back and arch into his touch when he pushes his warm palm up your shirt, pressed against your skin and holding you on the bed, close to him.

The trick reaches over to you, puts his hand on your crotch, fingers gripping your dick through your jeans. You suck in a breath and feel Brian smiling against your face; know he's aware of the touch, of your participation in this act.

Brian pulls at your t-shirt, frees your lips from his kiss for moments to pull the cotton over your head, then resumes the soft exploration of your mouth with his own as the button of your jeans is twisted open, the denim pushed down over your hips. You tug at your jeans and meet two hands there, Brian's and the trick's, and feel a little dizzy and light-headed. You know what has started and the anticipation and awareness that someone will be joining you and Brian tonight as you fuck – that you're starting your first threesome – it's a little overwhelming, and your stomach tightens and your mind races and then...

You're exposed and naked on the bed, Brian's mouth on yours. He pulls you closer to him and a hand grips your hip, twisting you on to your side and you feel warm breath, then soft lips and a tongue licking at the insides of your thighs, your balls, your pubes, your...

Oh...

Cock buried deep in the trick's mouth, Brian's fingers wrapped tightly around the back of your neck, holding you against his mouth... your body goes limp, you don't know what to do with your hands, with your legs, with anything, and so you let Brian guide you where he wants you to be... hips angled so your cock slides down the trick's throat, palm resting on his scalp, fingers twisting up in his hair, face pressed against Brian's, his tongue fucking your mouth slowly.

It's too soon that your breath starts to catch, that you feel the buzz in your spine and balls, and Brian knows, can feel it in your kiss, so he puts his hand over yours on the back of the trick's head and slides his leg over your thigh to trap you between them, to push your hips in and closer and more... and between the cock sucking and the tongue fucking and the tight grip on your hip, it's too much and you suck in one breath then another and another, each shorter than the last until you come, oh you come into the trick's mouth, your face full of Brian, your cock wet and hot and pulsing, and it makes you shake as you feel the intensity of what you've done, as the four hands and two mouths take over your body.

The trick pulls off your dick and Brian releases you from his grip, pulling the trick to his mouth... you watch as the trick slides his tongue across Brian's lips and into his mouth, sharing your come. It makes you hot watching them kiss and you stare for moments, slack jawed, wondering what you and Brian look like together when you make out at Babylon.

Brian pushes the trick down his chest to his dick, and you know what you want too, what you're hungry for now, so you slide down the sheets till you're face to face with dark curly pubes, and take the trick's dick between your lips eagerly. His cock is hot and slick with pre-come and you coat him with your spit, filling your mouth with his taste, hearing his muffled groans, his throat filled with Brian's cock. A hand on your head and you know it's Brian guiding you and you feel connected to him through the trick, know that what you do to the trick will resonate through to Brian.

You take the trick near orgasm then back again, over and over, until you sense a shifting above you. You pull your mouth off his dick and Brian eases the trick onto his back then works his way around the bed to kneel behind you. He coaxes you to your knees, then presses on the nape of your neck, urging you back to the trick's cock. You bury your face in his crotch again, then nearly choke as Brian's thumb pushes into your hole. You weren't expecting that, but Christ, it feels amazing, and you and relax and let him in... he thumb fucks you until you're barely sucking the trick's dick anymore, just holding him in your mouth and riding Brian's thumb back and forth until it's gone and you hear the tear of a wrapper and the pop of a cap and you know... oh God, you know...

You close your eyes and pull the trick's dick deep into your mouth, pressing your palms into his hip bones and then you feel cock slipping around your hole, Brian's firm hand on your shoulder and you breathe through your nose quickly, nearly hyperventilating with the anticipation until...

Pushed inside you, filling you and you groan and the trick pushes his hips up and his dick is in your throat and Brian's dick is up your ass and you're completed filled and being fucked – mouth and ass and it makes you feel so fucking hot and sexy and Brian's hair tickles your back as he leans over you and licks at the corner of your ear and tells you that he's gonna fuck you.

You want to cry yes, please, do, now, but your mouth is full of cock and all that comes out are deep, guttural moans – the trick feels the vibration and you taste his salty pre-come on your tongue, know he's gonna shoot, but you can't think about that, can only follow his hips as he writhes on the bed, can only let your body be pushed forward with every thrust of Brian's cock inside you. You're desperate to touch yourself, to stroke your cock to full arousal, to slick your fingers and wrap them tightly around yourself, to pull on your dick fast until you come.

The trick gasps louder, swearing under his breath, and his dick pulses in your mouth and you get ready to swallow... but then Brian's hand moves from your shoulder to tighten in your hair and he pulls you off the trick, leaving your lips swollen and sore and begging for more.

He brings your ear to his mouth, your back arched, ass still full of his cock, and it presses inside you at all sorts of different angles as he leans you back against his chest. He takes your hand in his and you can't see what he puts in your palm, but recognize the shape, and when his warm breath brushes into your ear with the words, "Fuck him," you feel a shiver down your back and nearly come.

He lets go of your hair and the trick knows what's coming and rolls over to his stomach, ass in the air, and you can hardly look at him without fear of ending it all before it starts. Brian senses your hesitation and pulls out of your ass, leaving you feeling empty where moments before you felt too full.

He puts his hands on your shoulders, and lets you prepare yourself and the trick, letting go of you only once to hand you the lube, then returning his warm palms to your shoulders. You've fucked three other guys since you fucked your first in this bed, but it's never been as hot as that first time, with Brian watching over you. You somehow know that this time will be even better than that; that you'll never fuck anyone again without remembering how this time felt.

The condom is on and you slick yourself well with the lube, push two fingers inside the trick, then grip his hip and guide your cock to his hole. Brian's hand leaves your shoulder and you feel familiar pressure on your own ass, and as you push inside the trick, Brian pushes back inside you and there's the tight intensity of fucking and the satisfying fullness of being fucked and your heart triple thumps and you feel completely, utterly turned inside out.

Brian thrusts inside you and it forces you into the trick; he slides out and you drag your ass back with him, drawing out slowly. You can't last like this, you know it, and too soon you feel near frantic, driving your dick forward into the trick, pushing back to fuck yourself on Brian's cock, the trick's fingers sweaty and gripping your thighs, Brian firmly gripping your shoulders, matching every second of your chaotic strokes with a deep thrust inside you, over and over until he presses his chest to your back and pushes you to lean over the trick, crushing your body between the two of you, suffocating you, stealing your breath and creating this intensity on your cock and ass that you've never, ever felt before... the trick comes, squeezing his ass on your dick and you can't take it, can't... and then you come and it's almost too much, too good, so concentrated and focused and overpowering and then Brian comes inside you, pushing you over the edge and you black out a little, following the trick to the bed as he collapses beneath you. You can't move, just lie prone and still and listening to the heaving breaths of the trick under your cheek, Brian's gasps echoing in your other ear.

You're paralyzed, but that's okay... Brian gently pulls out of you and lifts you up, rolling you onto your back on the cool sheets. You strip off the condom, then cup your cock and get a bit of the shakes, the aftereffects of the intense orgasm still echoing through your muscles. You close your eyes and don't open them for long minutes later, once the silence is restored to the loft, and the comforting familiar sense of being alone with Brian has returned.

You hear footsteps at the top of the stairs, a creak of the hardwood, the soft thump as Brian falls down on the bed beside you. The room is quiet save for your steady breathing, until your stomach breaks the silence with a groan.

Brian laughs and you open your eyes. "Hungry?" he asks and you nod, catching a glance at the clock.

"Shit," you say, sitting up to look for your underwear. "I gotta finish my stupid Algebra homework before it gets too late. It's kicking my ass this semester and probably going to take all fucking night."

Brian passes you your briefs from between the sheets, watching as you stand up and slip them on. You get your sweats from the drawer and feel his eyes on your back.

You turn to face him. "What?" you ask, feeling self-conscious. He shakes his head a little and gets up off the bed.

"Don't worry. I can help," he says, pulling on his jeans.

You scrunch up your face. "Help? What're you going to do to help?"

"I have been to university, you know," he says, raising his eyebrows. "In fact, I graduated with honors. I think I can handle fucking high school homework."

"Yeah, I know but..." But you don't know what. You like the idea of Brian helping you with your homework. He's never even taken an interest in what you do at school, and this just seems... well, cool. You nod your head. "Yeah, that would be great."

He heads into the kitchen as you finish pulling on your socks, watching him from the corner of your eye. People underestimate Brian – they don't know him, not like you do. You like that you know him better than anyone else.

You spread your books out on the kitchen counter and stuff a fork into the heaping bowl of reheated Pad Thai Brian pushes towards you, watching as he sticks his fork into your bowl and stabs a piece of tofu.

"What?" he says, mouth full of tofu.

You shake your head quickly. "Nothing," you say and spin noodles around your fork. "Just... well, thanks."

He nods and drops his fork in the sink. "Okay, let's get this fucking Algebra done," he says, and you bite your lips hard to keep from letting the smile out, eager to discover whatever surprises he might have in store for you next.


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[info]beathen
2007-04-11 01:16 am UTC (link)
OMG FIRST! Feedback in a few minutes...

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[info]beathen
2007-04-11 01:32 am UTC (link)
as you push inside the trick, Brian pushes back inside you and there's the tight intensity of fucking and the satisfying fullness of being fucked and your heart triple thumps and you feel completely, utterly turned inside out.

Wow. I love that description. Your stories are always so full of details that it almost makes me feel like I'm the person in the POV instead of it being a character. That's really awesome!

Brian helping Justin with his algebra after that hot fuck was so adorable and loving. I also like how Brian let Justin recover from his orgasm and took care of getting rid of the trick.

Excellent job!!!

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(no subject) - [info]xhaleslowly, 2007-04-11 01:41 am UTC

[info]court1429
2007-04-11 01:35 am UTC (link)
You agree that sometimes your judgment can be less than stellar.

I laughed out loud at this line and woke my animals up! :)

You have such a wonderful gift for not only painting a visual picture with your words, but you always give the scene the right emotional atmosphere, too. I can feel the scene, the physical sensations; hear the breaths, just a perfect tone in setting the scene and how IC B/J are.

So glad you're writing this challenge. Thank you!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-11 02:21 am UTC (link)
I laughed out loud at this line and woke my animals up! :)

Lol - oh good, I rarely try to put anything funny into my fics as I generally suck at it, but I'm glad that you enjoyed that line :D

Thank you so much for all your generous comments for my writing... I really appreciate your feedback - it means a lot and keeps me going!

So glad you're writing this challenge.

Hey, I'm *loving* writing this challenge - I'm just so appreciative of you guys that have waited patiently for me to put out each part! lol!

Thanks again for the comments :)

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[info]notsopeachie
2007-04-11 01:54 am UTC (link)
Hi there, New lurker. I just discovered you recently but my All I can say is guuuhhhh! Fucking hot. I see sweet dreams in my future!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-11 03:50 am UTC (link)
Well, welcome!! And thanks for offering up your feedback - it's always much appreciated :)

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[info]mi_nion
2007-04-11 01:59 am UTC (link)
This was fabulous! I esp like the extra touch of Brian helping Justin with his alegbra.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-11 03:52 am UTC (link)
Thanks for letting me know you liked the homework bit. It was a struggle to come up with a "subtle first time" for this one, and I was hoping this would work :)

Thanks for the feedback!

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[info]mdlaw
2007-04-11 02:07 am UTC (link)
Oh My the first time Brian helped Justin with his homework. m :D

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-11 03:59 am UTC (link)
Seriously, I think the best thing about writing these "first time" fics is having the opportunity to go back to season one and explore *all* the first times between them. I always loved Brian helping Justin out with his vocabulary in ep 109 - I kind of see this fic taking place around that time :)

Thanks - as always - for the feedback, M!

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(no subject) - [info]mdlaw, 2007-04-11 12:10 pm UTC
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[info]not_yet_defined
2007-04-11 02:17 am UTC (link)
OMG! YAY!. *runs off to read*

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[info]not_yet_defined
2007-04-11 02:41 am UTC (link)
god i love your fic. that was unbelievably hot. as always your attention to detail creates delicious visuals in the mind. so glad you are still continuing to write for paddies' fomd.

helping with the homework was a perfect schmoopy first.

once again a great pair of firsts, and reading this totally makes me want to go back and watch s1 again (or maybe first go back and re-read the other 4 firsts you have written again.)

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(no subject) - [info]xhaleslowly, 2007-04-12 03:29 am UTC

[info]such_a_steph
2007-04-11 02:19 am UTC (link)
Great dose of GUH! for the spring :D I'm glad you are enjoying some sunshine, and if that inspires more fic... bring on the summer I say (it will help to warm my cold winter *fans self*).

You painted a wonderful picture of Justin's excitement and anticipation when Brian called out to him. I could feel the shift from the begrudging acceptance of Brian's tricking, and it drew me straight in.

For me, this was the standout line, the one that caught me and took my breath away.
You close your eyes and don't open them for long minutes later, once the silence is restored to the loft, and the comforting familiar sense of being alone with Brian has returned. After all the heat and intensity is over, it's being alone with Brian that grounds him :)

Oh... and Brian eating from Justin's bowl... so adorable *grins* (and Brian being so nonchalant "What?"). Lovely moment.

Thanks again for another wonderful installment. See you next time *hugs* Steph

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 03:38 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much for all this detailed feedback - it's so great to get and truly helps me write the rest of the series.

You painted a wonderful picture of Justin's excitement and anticipation when Brian called out to him.

I'm glad that worked for you... I struggled with starting this fic because I wasn't sure how to "set the scene" at first, at least without it seeming too much like the first time fic #3 - but I also wanted to make sure the reader knew that Justin was "ready for anything".

And thanks for pulling out your favourite line - I love it when readers do that :)

As always, your comments are so very appreciated! I hope it won't be so long before I show my face again - first time #6 is already started, so it could be sooner than this last time ;)

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[info]darkhorse488
2007-04-11 02:27 am UTC (link)
Good lord that was hot and the ending was absolutely perfect. This series is making me so nostalgic for season 1! You're a very gifted writer and I can't wait for more updates.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 03:40 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much for this, Sarah - I had a heck of a time with the ending, so it's great to know you liked what I came up with!

And yeah, writing this has made me very nostalgic for S1 too :)

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[info]ashmedai
2007-04-11 02:28 am UTC (link)
A hand on your head and you know it's Brian guiding you and you feel connected to him through the trick, know that what you do to the trick will resonate through to Brian.

Brilliant!! I usually need twice as long to read your fics because I'm constantly backtracking and re-reading sentences like that two or three times, just to marvel at the wording and structure - lol. *iz dork*
Loved it - thanks for updating! :))

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 03:46 am UTC (link)
Thank you thank you thank you for this... I love playing with words and tying to do different things with structure, so it's so very awesome to get this kind of feedback :)

Much appreciated!

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[info]moose74
2007-04-11 02:30 am UTC (link)
I actually gasped audibly when I saw there was Ethan!fic on my f-list!!!

It was so hot, as always, but I love how you always get inside of (no pun) whoever's point of view you're writing from. Justin's whole state of mind the entire time and especially this line:

your heart triple thumps and you feel completely, utterly turned inside out

I just imagine that's exactly how it would feel being in this situation. (I haven't been 18 for awhile, or in this situation ever, being a girl and all, but I understand the being overwhelmed part.)

Gosh I'm rambling! Hot and sweet at the end, which is another of my favorite things about your writing; your obvious love for these characters. Thanks for putting a smile on my face this evening! :)

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 03:58 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much for all this, Moose... it's so good to know that you guys are still out there and interested in reading my little fics :)

And thanks for pulling out that line... I just wanted to try and capture that *omfg* overwhelming feeling without going overboard with too many words, you know? I'm glad it worked for you!

...which is another of my favorite things about your writing; your obvious love for these characters

Aw, yeah, I do love these characters. I love that they've inspired me to write, and I love that there is so much of their story to tell :)

Thanks again, sweetie - glad my fic made you smile :X

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(Anonymous)
2007-04-11 02:33 am UTC (link)
I discovered your fiction through Fansee and Chering, who have given you full credit for being their inspiration. I totally agree that you're a fuckin' great inspiration! (That's my Debbie impression - thank you very much.)

All your fiction is wonderfully evocative. Thanks for being in this community.

Much love, and write more...Suzanne

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[info]sevigny7
2007-04-11 02:35 am UTC (link)
So sorry that read as anonymous! I'm not...

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:01 am UTC (link)
Many thanks for this, Suzanne! And I'm very glad to be a part of this community - the support that I've received for my writing has been incredible and definitely has inspired *me* to continue :)

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[info]qafaddiction
2007-04-11 02:38 am UTC (link)
As always, the hotness of the story matches the fiery orange of your LJ... but would you think I was really strange if I said the sexiest thing about this one was Brian wanting to help Justin with his homework? And I mean that in a really, really good way. Brian doesn't do anything lightly, especially when it comes to helping others. To me, the offer was Brian's version of "cuddling" after sex. LOL Great job, Ethan. :)

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:10 am UTC (link)
but would you think I was really strange if I said the sexiest thing about this one was Brian wanting to help Justin with his homework

Nope, not at all... and since I had a helluva time coming up with that ending, I'm *very* glad to hear you enjoyed it! lol!! It's been challenging, but interesting, trying to come up with the subtle first times for these fics. The homework idea came from a repeat viewing of 109, where Brian is helping Justin with his vocabulary - I thought it might be interesting to see the "first time" he ever offered Justin that kind of help :)

Thanks so much for the feedback, Heather - it's always good to hear from you!

PS - I've been considering redesigning my website and was going to nuke the orange, but your comment has made me rethink that! lol! ;)

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[info]tawny_7
2007-04-11 02:43 am UTC (link)
Wow...as usual it was wonderful. I still love the way you write both Brian and Justin. It seems so them. I think you did great with the ending as well...let's us know Brian feels more for Justin than he outwardly shows.

I'm looking forward to the next installment of this!

You hav a great night/day...whichever it is where you live.

*hugs*

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:12 am UTC (link)
It seems so them.

The most important thing for me when writing fic is to try and make sure I keep them in character, so that's just about the best feedback to get :)

Thanks very much for your comment, Tawny!

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[info]lunachickk
2007-04-11 02:49 am UTC (link)
OMG, that was hot!
And I completely LOVED the homework scene at the end!
You have such a wonderful grasp of tone of S1 in this series. So good.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:14 am UTC (link)
You have such a wonderful grasp of tone of S1 in this series

That's such great feedback, Lunie - thanks very much for that! I've been *loving* writing the S1 stuff, so I'm so glad to hear that you feel the tone is right :)

Thanks for the comment!

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[info]mclachlan
2007-04-11 02:54 am UTC (link)
GUH.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:15 am UTC (link)
lol! Thanks for that :P

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[info]metafascinating
2007-04-11 03:08 am UTC (link)
OMG! I loved it!! So hot and also so sweet with the homework part. Can't wait to read more!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:15 am UTC (link)
Thanks for this, Sherri! Much appreciated :) Hopefully the next part won't be tooooo far away...

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[info]bodleian
2007-04-11 04:04 am UTC (link)
I've read it once and I will be rereading it soon. You are writing this '1st time' series so well - you can feel Justin's disappointment when he knows that there is a trick in the loft (even though he thinks that it is OK), then his tredipation as he joins in for his first threesome, his pleasure as he becomes a very willing participant and finally, when the trick leaves, his happiness as Brian starts to help him with his algebra. At the end, Justin sees a Brian that no one else sees and I think that this gives the greatest pleasure of all.
Of course, Justin will also be looking forward to any other sexual pleasures that Brian will introduce him to...
Write soon, please.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:22 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much for this detailed feedback... I'm so glad to hear that you were able to capture all those emotions as you read through the fic. I really wanted to make sure the reader felt that yeah, Justin's anxious, but also that he's curious about the experience.

The great thing about Gio's "first time list" is that they're all acts that we never saw on screen, but we know *did* happen. So I kind of have a frame of reference, but also lots of room to play around ;) It's been great fun to write this series, and getting this kind of feedback totally makes me glad that I took it on (and encourages me to finish up the other five quickly!) :)

Thanks again for this - always appreciated!

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[info]itsjustkristen
2007-04-11 04:17 am UTC (link)
What a lovely surpise to see a post from you!

I loved this, it was totally hot and then totally sweet with the homework helping.

Good to see you around! ♥

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:24 am UTC (link)
Thanks for this Kristen! And yes, I know my updates have been few and far between these days - I so appreciate you guys sticking around and being patient with me :)

Thanks again for this - hope to have the new part along a little quicker this time!

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[info]rebeccama
2007-04-11 04:22 am UTC (link)
Gah. That was wonderful. It was hot and the end with Brian offering to help Justin with his homework is great.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:25 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much for this - and I'm glad you liked the end bit with the homework :P

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[info]smartwomn1
2007-04-11 05:14 am UTC (link)
Hi Ethan.
Several some ones have been remarking on the time going by and our mutual love for B/J remaining strong.
How nice to have you bring a lovely reminder of the pr0n that really is the glue (sic).
As I'm back in school, I wish I had a Brian (or frankly a Ted would do) to help with statistics homework!
LeAnn

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:27 am UTC (link)
Thanks for the comment, LeAnn (and the grin - if I could send Brian to help you with your homework, I promise I would! lol!)

And yeah, I have to say that I never ever thought that I'd still be writing fan fic two years (has it been that long?) since the show was over, but yet, here I am. Can't help myself I guess! lol!

Thanks again, and good luck with the stats homework :P

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[info]no_apologies_86
2007-04-11 06:32 am UTC (link)
*loves*

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:30 am UTC (link)
*mwah*

Thank you :)

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[info]msjudi
2007-04-11 07:28 am UTC (link)
Yay, oh yay, oh yay!! I love Ethan!fic and this one is hot and sweet. Domestic Brian and Justin do it for me almost as much as sexy Brian and Justin!

Thanks for this Ethan :D

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:36 am UTC (link)
Well hello, Judi!!! Thanks so much for your comments, it's always so good to hear from you :X

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[info]esamovol
2007-04-11 08:59 am UTC (link)
OMG so hot.

I love that Brian is heating up food for Justin. If that isn't love, I don't know what is.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:39 am UTC (link)
Aw, thanks for this... and yeah, I could just kinda see Brian doing that for Justin. Just taking care of him, I guess. Glad you liked that part :)

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[info]begok
2007-04-11 09:21 am UTC (link)
So hot. So beautiful. So precious.

Your fics always are great.

Thx, Ethan.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2007-04-12 04:39 am UTC (link)
Thanks for this feedback - it's much appreciated!

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