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New Fic: First Time for Everything (1/10): B/J: NC-17
Well, I never thought I'd be saying this again, but I'm writing a new series :) Inspired by and dedicated to the wonderful [info]paddies, I'm taking a crack at writing "the fic of her dreams" (yes, all 10!). Read her original request or just go right on into the fic!

Hope you enjoy it :)



Title: First Time for Everything
Chapter: 1/10
Justin's POV : NC-17 for coarse language and explicit sex
Premise: Series fic based on [info]paddies, request for "the fic of her dreams".

This is the first installment: #1 First time Justin GAVE a blowjob.

First Time for Everything

It's warmer and wetter and bigger than you thought, and you sit up to get a better angle, to get more of him inside you, kneeling between his legs as he lies back on the couch. The hardwood bites into your knees, but you don't really notice, just concentrate on him and this. His dick pulses inside your mouth and he tastes... just... good, like salt and sex and your own come when you've sucked it off your fingers after jacking off.

You make sure your teeth are covered and put one hand on his hip and wrap the other around the base of his cock, pushing him further between your lips, feeling the stretch of your jaw as you tense - you try to relax but can't really because you're too excited and overwhelmed and nervous and desperate to do this right. So you breathe slowly through your nose and sit up more and keep filling your mouth with his dick until your lips hit your fist and your breath comes sharp and you swallow around him and...

"Fuck," he moans and twists his fingers into your short hair, pulling the strands between his knuckles, nails scratching softly at your scalp. You take him even deeper into your mouth, touching the back of your tongue, nearing the back of your throat till you feel like you might gag, and you do a little, bucking forward, breath catching and stomach jumping into your throat. He grips your hair hard in his fingers and eases you back.

"Slow, s'okay, don't rush," he mumbles and pets your hair softly and you glance up at him, your eyes catching his and he rubs his thumb across the arch of your cheekbone, his eyes lazily closing as he leans his head back on the couch, and you know you're doing okay. You pull up till you can touch his cock head with the tip of your tongue and suck him softly, then flick his slit with your tongue, back and forth and back and forth; taste the slippery pre-come as it coats your tongue, thick and clear and stringing from his slit to your mouth. You spread it across your lips and mouth, rub his cock across your skin, slowing to kiss and lick his slit, to run your tongue around his dick head, letting spit drip down your tongue to his dick to your hand.

"Jesus," he gasps, his fingers tightening on your hair, other hand dragging down the side of your face, across your cheek, palm warm on your skin, damp and your face is flushed, hot, sweaty, Christ. You try to remember all the things he's done to you, the things that made your eyes roll back and the come shoot from your dick before you'd even realized that it happened... but you can't remember, it's all a blur and so you just try to breathe, taking short shaky breaths and filling your nose with the smell of soap and cock and just that smell of the loft that you've come to love, even though you've only been here three times before. Cut pine, fresh laundry, furniture polish, cigarettes, bourbon, condoms...

You want to touch yourself but don't want to break contact with his skin, need to hold onto him, one hand pumping his dick into your mouth, the other spread out on his hip. The tips of his fingers slide under your jaw and you feel his hand guiding you, holding you, following you... it's intimate like you never thought and you stare up at him, mouth suctioning on his cock, trail your hand from his hip and press it against his flat stomach, warm under your palm. You feel him breathing fast and erratic and his other hand slides behind your neck and pushes you forward, closer, deeper and he opens his eyes and sees you and smiles and you want to smile back but can't with your mouth full of his cock.

And then he pumps his hips slowly, fucking your mouth like it was your ass, but slower and softer and smoother and you breathe and run your tongue along the underside of his shaft and let him fuck you, fuck your mouth and throat, use you for this, and you open your lips to let your spit slide down his dick and you pump your fist up and down his cock, spreading your spit on him, slicking him with it and you sit up more and moan in your throat because you fucking love it, love this feeling of fullness and you close your eyes and bob up and down on his shaft over and over and he fucks your mouth and then...

Fingers grip your hair and he sucks in a breath and pushes inside your mouth and gets even bigger, hotter, deeper, more and you hold your breath for what you know is going to happen... and then it does, warm come spilling into your throat and you swallow hard without thinking, without waiting to really taste it and know it and let it fill your mouth. But it's inside you now. He's inside you now, and his dick softens on your tongue and you swallow come and spit and sigh softly through your nose as you let him fall from between your swollen lips.

He grips the back of your neck tightly and drags you up his body and kisses you hard, tongue lapping inside your mouth, taking away whatever's left, and that... that is simply the hottest kiss you've ever had.

"Not bad," he says, face shining with warmth, smile playing around his lips. "I mean, for a first timer. You weren't lying when you said you'd never done this before, were you?" He looks at you suspiciously, raising an eyebrow, and you start to stutter out a protest, but then realize he's kidding when the corner of his mouth curls into a grin, his eyes crinkling at the corners softly.

"What can I say, I'm a natural," you say and bite your bottom lip to stop from smiling too broadly, to stop it from taking over your face. You roll off his lap and melt into the couch, feeling sated and relaxed, even though you didn't come. But you feel him inside you still, your lips swollen and hot and his taste fills your mouth.

He kisses you on the forehead then steps back into his jeans, pulling them up around his hips as he stands up, watching as you lay back on the couch... stretching and smiling and looking more than a little pleased with yourself.

He heads into the kitchen and you hear him rustling around, then the quiet buzz of a dial tone. "You hungry?" he says, looking at you upside down from behind the couch.

"Always," you murmur, sliding down the cushions and rubbing your grumbling stomach.

"You're not allergic to peanuts or anything, are you? Because Thai food is shit without peanut sauce," he starts to dial as you shake your head 'no'.

He orders and you're almost too taken with yourself and what you just did to realize that Brian has never, ever ordered food for you before. But not quite. You figure you did a fucking good job if he's ready to buy you dinner after that and you grin inside and think about how only two weeks ago you'd never been fucked, never sucked cock, and definitely never had an incredibly hot guy order Thai food for you.

You let your tongue slip across your lips and taste the salt and sweat there, licking the taste of his pubes away, and you wonder if he'd let you suck his cock again, right now. You loved it. You can't wait to do it again. You somehow know you were born to do this and know you were good at it. Really good.

You close your eyes and stroke your cock slowly through your jeans, fingers pressing against denim, your dick hard and warm and...

His fingers cover yours and you open your eyes to see him fall to his knees in front of you. He pulls your hand from your dick and puts it on the sofa cushion, then slides his thumb under the button on your jeans, pulling them open.

You watch him through lazy eyes, follow his tongue as it slips across his lips, lift up your hips when he pushes his hands under your rear to pull your pants down. You feel wanton, your bare bottom on the thousand dollar sofa cushion, the soft fabric smooth across your skin. But he doesn't seem to care, and you know that this definitely won't be the first time your ass makes its imprint on the seat. His thumb runs along the length of your exposed cock and he kisses your stomach, one hand on your hip, the other working it's way towards your asshole. You try really hard not to come at the thought of it.

"There's more to learn," he says, looking up at you, chin brushing against your pubes, finger pressing against your hole.

You arch up off the couch into his touch, close your eyes and whisper out: "I'm ready."

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[info]mdlaw
2006-09-27 01:26 am UTC (link)
Yayayayayayayayaayayayay!!!!!!! Oh wait, I have to go read now. YAY YAY!!!!!!! m

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-27 01:28 am UTC (link)
lol! Hope you enjoy it!! :)

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(no subject) - [info]mdlaw, 2006-09-27 01:36 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]xhaleslowly, 2006-09-27 03:29 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]mdlaw, 2006-09-27 12:06 pm UTC

[info]court1429
2006-09-27 01:32 am UTC (link)
Hi Ethan -- Your fic and Myrna's were the very first fics I ever read. Talk about setting the bar of expectation high... I adore your writing and am thrilled to see this new series.

Never say never... :D

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-27 03:31 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much for this! And yeah, I admit I wasn't expecting to write a series, but I just got inspired by Gio's concept (though I am a little late with it - she first mentioned it like two years ago! lol!)

Thanks for the feedback and encouragement :)

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[info]quinn222
2006-09-27 01:38 am UTC (link)
Yeah!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-27 03:32 am UTC (link)
Thank you :)

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[info]annie420
2006-09-27 01:40 am UTC (link)
That just made my day.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-27 03:33 am UTC (link)
That's always good to hear :) Thank you!

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[info]sapphire9977
2006-09-27 01:43 am UTC (link)
Yay! Not only new fic but a new series? I'm in heaven! And if this is any indication of what's to come then all I have to say is damn! I better get used to cold showers!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-27 03:35 am UTC (link)
Glad you liked it! And yes, a series... though I'm already started to feel anxious about writing the rest of them - I better get to it! lol!

Thanks for the comment :)

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[info]beathen
2006-09-27 01:47 am UTC (link)
That was so incredibly hot! I'm so glad this is going to be a series so I can have a regular dose of cold showers such amazing writing. I only wish I could write as well as you! Your attention to detail and descriptions, as in all your fics, really make the story come alive for me. I particularly love how gentle Brian is with Justin. Wonderful job!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-27 03:37 am UTC (link)
Aw, thank you so much for this, especially all your generous words about my writing. I particularly appreciate you mentioning the attention to detail... it's one thing I always try to achieve in my fics, so it's great to get this kind of feedback :)

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(no subject) - [info]beathen, 2006-09-27 03:43 am UTC

[info]triciaqaf
2006-09-27 01:48 am UTC (link)
Oh my god. You're writing all 10?

I may just die now.

Life is good. Very, very good. :)) (as is this fic, btw ;)

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-27 03:38 am UTC (link)
You're writing all 10?

Well, I'm gonna try my damndest, anyway :P

Thanks for the comment, sweetie :X :X :X

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[info]besame_bj
2006-09-27 01:56 am UTC (link)
Ah, Ethan ... so, so good. You write such beautiful, sensual stuff and always fill it with the essence of Brian and Justin. And there is something very loving about everything you write that imbues each piece with a hopefulness that I love.

I also love that you show us the Brian that only Justin saw. Like this:

"Slow, s'okay, don't rush," he mumbles and pets your hair softly and you glance up at him, your eyes catching his and he rubs his thumb across the arch of your cheekbone, his eyes lazily closing as he leans his head back on the couch, and you know you're doing okay.

Really wonderful.

I am so *thrilled* to hear you're writing a series and I can't wait for the next installment!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:34 am UTC (link)
Thank you for this, Eileen... it's so great to get this feedback and I just love what you said about my writing. I appreciate it all so much :X

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[info]musicsexual
2006-09-27 01:59 am UTC (link)
ZOMG NEW ETHAN FICSERIES!

You've made my day, like always. That was hot and wonderful and as much as I planned to leave a decent comment, I'm now all flustered and incoherent. *melts*

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:35 am UTC (link)
lol! Thanks so much for this :) So glad you enjoyed it!!

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[info]luciblue
2006-09-27 02:03 am UTC (link)
Ethan, you slay me everytime!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:36 am UTC (link)
Aw, thanks for this :)

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[info]tonyans1975
2006-09-27 02:04 am UTC (link)
Damn... that's about all I can manage now...

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:36 am UTC (link)
:P Thanks for the comment... glad you liked it!

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[info]sandid
2006-09-27 02:32 am UTC (link)
I haven't read this yet. No doubt, I'll love it.

The wonderful Paddies needs to make an icon for each of your chapters.

What could be better. One of my favorite writers and one of the best icon makers.

*runs off to read*

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:37 am UTC (link)
The wonderful Paddies needs to make an icon for each of your chapters.

Hmm... yes, I was thinking the same thing ;) I might just have to ask her if she has time to make some to go along with the series :P

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[info]moose74
2006-09-27 02:33 am UTC (link)
I don't have time to read this right now, but you have made my month!

I am MAKING time tomorrow... XD

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:38 am UTC (link)
lol! Thanks for this... hope you enjoyed the fic :)

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[info]sandid
2006-09-27 02:43 am UTC (link)
whoa! I feel like a smoke and I haven't had one in years. heeeeheeee

Yeah! Thanks, Ethan....welcome home

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:39 am UTC (link)
Glad you liked it, darlin'!

welcome home

Thank you :)

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[info]flamencanyc
2006-09-27 02:48 am UTC (link)
There's very little that can make me as happy as seeing your name pop up on my f-list! And with Gio's challenge yet! Yay! Off to read...

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:40 am UTC (link)
Aw, thanks Flame :) It's good to hear that people aren't tired of hearing from me yet! lol!

Hope you enjoy the fic!

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(no subject) - [info]flamencanyc, 2006-09-28 08:42 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]xhaleslowly, 2006-09-30 11:45 pm UTC
Ethan!!
[info]tawny_7
2006-09-27 03:00 am UTC (link)
I can't read this right now as I'm about to fall asleep...and I know if I read this I won't be able to sleep!!! lol!!!

Now I have something to read tomorrow!!!

I'm so glad you've written something new!

I'll be back to comment tomorrow!!

*hugs to Ethan*

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Re: Ethan!!
[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:57 am UTC (link)
lol! Thanks darlin' - hope you enjoyed it!

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[info]sian265
2006-09-27 03:01 am UTC (link)
"THUD"!!!! Someone come help me up off the floor!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:41 am UTC (link)
lol! Thanks for the comment :P

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[info]mclachlan
2006-09-27 03:02 am UTC (link)
Jesus, Ethan! Way to make me combust!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:42 am UTC (link)
Well, I'm glad the fic had it's intended effect ;)

Thanks, sweetie :)

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[info]rebeccama
2006-09-27 03:17 am UTC (link)
That was very nice. I loved Justin being unsure even though Brian's reaction shows he is doing well for the first time.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:50 am UTC (link)
Thanks for this, Rebecca - and especially for noticing Justin's "unsureness" at his first time. After writing five seasons of QAF fics, it took me a bit to get back into the "first time" headspace again :P

Glad you enjoyed it :)

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[info]lunachickk
2006-09-27 03:27 am UTC (link)
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!
*runs off to read*

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[info]darkhorse488
2006-09-27 03:35 am UTC (link)
Omg It's new Ethan fic and a series no less!! Loved this chapter can't wait for the next 10!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 04:51 am UTC (link)
Geez, I had *really* get started writing the next chapters!! lol!

Thanks for the comment :)

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YEAH
[info]smartwomn1
2006-09-27 03:36 am UTC (link)
I'm so pleased that you're inspired to write a series!
I'm so pleased you're reaching back so far -- what brought that up?
I'm so pleased to see [info]paddies honored in this way; she has supported the fandom faithfully for so long...virtually all my icons are hers.
Generally speaking, I'm pretty all-around pleased.

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Re: YEAH
[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 05:04 am UTC (link)
Yeah, I don't know what got into me, but somehow I've found enough inspiration to start a new series :) I don't usually like committing to something before I've got it all written, but I've felt like I just haven't been writing much of anything lately, and at least this gets me writing again.

I don't know what reminded me of Gio's challenge in the first place, but I guess it's been in the back of my head for a little while now, and when I asked her about it recently, she was so enthusiastic and offered so much encouragement that I just couldn't pass it up :) (And as you say, I really wanted to do something for her since she's done so much for everyone else!)

So glad you liked the first chapter... I better get working on the next one now! lol!

Thank you for this :X

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[info]my2cats
2006-09-27 03:57 am UTC (link)
OMG,I loved this chapter,so hot.
Can't wait to read the rest of the series.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 05:05 am UTC (link)
Thanks for letting me know you liked it! Much appreciated :)

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[info]llvoncan
2006-09-27 04:14 am UTC (link)
Yippee!! Yahoo!! Another SERIES from Ethan!! Whoo hoo-we are so lucky. This was just pure sex and so wonderful. And so right there-yes, this happened and we never saw it in the series, but it happened. So glad; so very glad

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[info]sandid
2006-09-27 11:27 am UTC (link)
SENDS A HUG.....

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(no subject) - [info]xhaleslowly, 2006-09-28 05:07 am UTC

[info]netlagd
2006-09-27 04:53 am UTC (link)
*THUD*

need a cold shower ... looking forward to needing nine more

I think I just found my new obsession

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-09-28 05:09 am UTC (link)
Thanks for this... the next one will be on the way soon! (Provided I don't get caught up in any more RPS plot ideas!! lol! ;)

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