xhaleslowly ([info]xhaleslowly) wrote,
@ 2006-03-22 17:56:00
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Current mood:sleepy

New Fic: Sick: B/J
Geez, somehow time just seemed to get away from me this month, I'm really not sure what happened :P But I did want to let you guys know I'm still around and writing, and so managed to finish up this silly little fic that had been kicking around my head for awhile.

It's little and pointless and dedicated to everyone that's been sick these last weeks :)



Title: Sick
Justin's POV: PG-13ish for language and a little bit of sex
Premise: Brian and Justin are stuck in bed sick.

Sick

"Briiiiiiaaaaaaaan... fuuuuuuuuuuck... Briiaaaaaannnnnn," I moan. Usually these words would precede a please or a more or a harder. But right now all they're followed by is a miserable hacking cough.

I hear a snuffle beside me, then: "If you think you're getting any sympathy fro- ACHOOO!!"

"Bless you."

"Fuck you."

I roll onto my side and watch as Brian blows his nose into a handful of Kleenex. "It's not my fault you're sick," I grab the tissue box from him and pull out a couple for myself.

"The fuck it's not. You're the one that got sick first, so therefore, yes, it is your fault I'm sick," Brian swipes at his nose one last time with the tissues, then tosses the wad to the side of the bed, curling up under the covers again.

"Well, I didn't force you to kiss me," I say, blowing my nose between breaths. "Or fuck me. And I told you that I had a sore throat, but you called me a princess and then-"

He weakly pushes a spare pillow at me. "Enough. My head is fucking pounding. Just... be quiet, okay?" he groans and throws his forearm over his eyes, sucking in a shallow breath and coughing as he lets it out. "Fuck," he mumbles softly.

I put my hand on his arm and lower my voice. "Why don't you get an Advil or something? You'd feel better."

He lifts his head the tiniest bit and peers into the kitchen towards where we keep the medicine stuff, then drops his head back down. "Too far," he groans.

I follow his gaze and consider getting out of bed to get it for him... but my head is pounding and my nose won't stop itching and my eyes are watering and I feel like I swallowed a canon ball and it's lodged in my throat and... I let my head fall back to the pillow and breathe through my mouth ‘cause my nose is completely stuffed up.

"Yeah," I sniffle. "It is."

"Shhhhhhhh..." he says, then sneezes again.

"I hate this," I groan and open my mouth wide to try and unplug my ears.

He glances over at me for a long moment, then laughs softly. "Practicing sucking my cock?"

"No, it's my ears... they're plugged up and I can't fucking hear." I jam my finger in my ear as if that'll somehow help, then try opening my mouth wide again.

He rolls his head on the pillow and sighs. "Stop it."

I swallow hard, grimacing at the rawness in my throat. "Why? I'm not making any noise."

"I want you to stop because it's making me wish you were sucking my cock," he rubs his hands over his face, then pushes them under the covers.

"Trust me, I wish I could too," I say, blowing my nose again. "But I don't think that would be the best idea since I'd probably fucking suffocate." I grin at him, and he looks at me, scrunching up his face.

"It's been two days you know," he says, and starts moving his hand under the covers. "Since we've fucked. Two whole goddamn days."

"And we've spent nearly that entire time in bed without fucking." I let my hand creep down to the band of my pajama pants and slide my fingers underneath.

"Gotta be some kind of record," he mumbles, tries to laugh, but ends up coughing. "You know this is all your fault," he tries again, but I'm not buying it.

"Yeah well it's your fault I'm hard now. And there's nothing we can do about it," I touch my cock and let my scratchy eyes slide shut. Christ, I wish he could fuck me, but I know we'd both end up having coughing fits.

He slowly shifts over to his side, facing me, then pushes a bunch of Kleenex into his face again, blowing hard with a big *honk*.

"Sexy," I roll my eyes and stick my tongue between my teeth.

"If I didn't feel like I was going to die, I'd roll you onto your stomach, climb up on your back, and push my cock into your tight little hole so fast and so hard that it'd wipe that smile off your face," he closes his eyes as if going through the motions in his head.

"Christ, Brian," I close my eyes and imagine it too, squeezing my dick lightly between my fingers. "Don't tease."

He laughs softly, then sniffs loudly.

"C'mere," he motions me over and I shift closer to him, swiping at my nose with the back of my hand. My face feels hot and my skin burns, and not in that nice sexy way it usually does when I'm in bed with Brian.

He reaches under the covers and pulls on the band of my pajama pants, slipping them over my hip. I lift up so he can push them down around my thighs, freeing my hard cock.

The duvet rustles as he does the same, pushing his sweat pants down around his thighs. He sticks his tongue in his cheek and sniffles before grabbing my wrist and putting my hand on his cock. He's hot and hard and closes his eyes when my fingers wrap around him.

Then his fingers are on me and we're jacking each other off like we're 15 and in high school, but god*damn* it feels good and when he swipes his thumb over my slit and squeezes me hard, just there, like that... oh...

My come spills between his fingers and I pull on his dick faster, bringing him with me, coaxing the come out of him and into my hand. It's warm and sticky and he sighs and smiles, still stroking my softening cock slowly, making me shiver.

"You know..." he says, grinning and wiping my come from between his fingers with a Kleenex. "I completely forgot about my headache and fucking itchy eyes for the ten minutes you were jacking me off."

"We might've actually found a cure for the common cold," I laugh and roll onto my back, dragging my fingers across my chest, leaving long wet stripes of his come on my skin.

"We could be rich," he says lazily, and sighs loudly, satisfied.

"You already are rich," I say, looking over at him.

He grins. "Richer, then."

I close my eyes and take in the warm feeling of sex in the air. "Brian?" I ask after a few moments of silence.

"Yeah?" his voice is heavy and deep.

"Maybe we should... you know, test the theory," I ask him, sniffling back my runny nose and touching my cock again.

He shifts closer to me and pushes my hand away from my dick, replacing it with his own and stroking me softly. "You think?" he asks.

It feels so good, and I curl my fingers behind his neck and pull him to me for an open-mouthed kiss, swiping my tongue against his.

"Keep doing that and we'll both be sick for days longer," he warns, grunting a little in his throat as I wrap my hand around his cock.

"Don't care," I say against his face and kiss him again, breathing through my mouth and kissing him at the same time. "Do you?"

He slides his free hand behind me and pulls me closer, tickles my crack with his fingers, then lets his hand creep lower, pushing against my hole with his middle finger. "Nope," he says, rubbing his hot forehead against mine.

"Good," I whisper against his mouth. My throat is still raw and swollen, my head still pounds, my eyes still feel itchy and dry and my nose is still stuffed up. But when he tickles my side and slides his leg over mine, pulling me to him... when he strokes my slippery cock slowly, and moans that way in his throat when I do the same back to him... none of the other stuff really matters.

And, as predicted, we're both sick for the rest of the month.

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[info]seamonkeyz27
2006-03-23 02:19 am UTC (link)
awwww.... that sure is some good cure!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:44 am UTC (link)
:P Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

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[info]damietta
2006-03-23 02:24 am UTC (link)
Think Kinnetic would come up with the ad campaign for that cure? You betcha!

Sweet, caring and so B/J. (I always love to hear Brian say, "C'mere".)

Thanks!

Deb

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:45 am UTC (link)
Think Kinnetic would come up with the ad campaign for that cure?

LOL! Now *that* would be interesting ;)

Thanks for the great feedback, Deb :) Much appreciated!

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[info]mclachlan
2006-03-23 02:27 am UTC (link)
Awww...

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:46 am UTC (link)
Thanks, sweetie :)

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[info]hot143chocolate
2006-03-23 02:28 am UTC (link)
Loved it!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:46 am UTC (link)
Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it :)

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[info]llvoncan
2006-03-23 02:33 am UTC (link)
Ethan;
Hurry and get a patent!!! It sounds like a winner to me!! Who the hell cares how long you are sick if you can feel good at the same time? Great little ficlet-you're the best
Lois

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:48 am UTC (link)
Hurry and get a patent!!! It sounds like a winner to me!!

Lol! Thanks for the great comment, Lois :)

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[info]mirror_mirror
2006-03-23 02:38 am UTC (link)
Only you can make a couple of runny-nosed guys sexy. Well, they *are* Brian and Justin, but still...

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:49 am UTC (link)
Only you can make a couple of runny-nosed guys sexy.

lol! Thanks for that :P Glad you liked this one :)

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[info]bjfan323
2006-03-23 02:51 am UTC (link)
As usual wonderful story! And just the thing I needed when I myself am feeling under the weather! Keep them coming Ethan! You're a great writer!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:50 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much for this! And yeah, I'm still writing - will have another one out soon ;)

Hope you're feeling better :)

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[info]vlredreign
2006-03-23 02:51 am UTC (link)
Mmmm...can they come over and help me get well, too? That was...just what I needed after a hard day's work. I think there's something in the air. It's been a rough winter. Thanks for this!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:52 am UTC (link)
Mmmm...can they come over and help me get well, too?

lol! Glad you liked this one - and hey, spring is *just* around the corner....... ;)

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[info]faramir_boromir
2006-03-23 03:04 am UTC (link)
Who knows if it will work for anybody else, but if it keeps them in bed for another month, I think that's a freakin' great 'cure' they've discovered.

Thanks for posting this!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:52 am UTC (link)
lol! Thanks for the smile :) Glad you enjoyed the fic!

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[info]qafaddiction
2006-03-23 03:09 am UTC (link)
Ethan, that was just sick! LOL Nah, it was very sweet, actually, and a lot of fun, especially the way Brian was trying to blame Justin for his condition. heh. Thanks for sharing it!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:53 am UTC (link)
...especially the way Brian was trying to blame Justin for his condition

I could just see him doing that, you know? I had to put that in there :P

So glad you liked it, Heather :) Thanks for the comment!

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[info]plumsuede
2006-03-23 03:09 am UTC (link)
thank you. i have this esoteric fetish for pointless fic...really makes me miss them, though. jeesh. *sneezes*

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:56 am UTC (link)
*hugs* Hope you're feeling better soon, Plummy :) I wrote this one with you in mind :X

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[info]mdlaw
2006-03-23 03:12 am UTC (link)
I've been sick as a dog for three days. Why hasn't anyone shared that cure with me? sigh I'll bet a sick Brian is adorable, in a little boy whiny way. Thanks for the fun. m

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:58 am UTC (link)
I'll bet a sick Brian is adorable, in a little boy whiny way.

Yeah, I could totally see that :P

Hope you feel better soon - and thanks for the comment!

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[info]tawny_7
2006-03-23 03:13 am UTC (link)
Hey there Ethan! I've missed you! Of course Brian and Justin can make being sick sound like a good thing!! Thanks for continuing to write! Looking forward to more of your fic! Take care!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 02:59 am UTC (link)
Aw, thanks sweetie... so glad you liked this one! And I'm really hoping to have another fic out next week :)

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[info]itsjustkristen
2006-03-23 03:19 am UTC (link)
That was really sweet! I love domestic!B/J. It makes me all warm and fuzzy.
Good to see you, Ethan! I've missed you.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 03:03 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much, Kristen :) I like the domestic, everyday stuff with them too. It's something I always wish we could've seen more of on the show.

And I hope that I'm back now for a little bit, anyway. I didn't mean to be away so long, but somehow time got away from me. I've got my fingers crossed that I can finish up my next fic for next week :)

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[info]bea_nonymous
2006-03-23 03:20 am UTC (link)
He slowly shifts over to his side, facing me, then pushes a bunch of Kleenex into his face again, blowing hard with a big *honk*.

That seriously made me laugh out loud for a long time. The image of Brian honking cracks me up. Thanks for a fun read!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:43 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for letting me know you liked that part :P Glad you enjoyed the fic!

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[info]jealin98
2006-03-23 03:21 am UTC (link)
Hey sweetie, you have been missed!!! So glad you are back and with this nice little fic. Seriously how can two men, sick, blowing noses and coughing be so damn sexy at the same time? LOL...They are hot even when they have colds, and besides them staying in bed for a month...nothing wrong with that!!

Nice way to send me to bed Ethan, always a pleasure. Don't let that RL stuff keep you from stopping in. You can just say hey every now and again...but if you want to stop in with a treat we sure wouldn't complain, LOL...Love ya hon.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:47 pm UTC (link)
Aw, thanks so much for this... you're always so generous with your comments, sweetie :X

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(Anonymous)
2006-03-23 03:34 am UTC (link)
Wonderful, as usual.

I like that you've written about as real as life gets.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:49 pm UTC (link)
I like that you've written about as real as life gets.

Thanks very much for that!

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[info]shadownyc
2006-03-23 03:35 am UTC (link)
That was so much fun. When I'm sick I never have that good a time. LOL

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:49 pm UTC (link)
Lol! Thanks for the smile :P Glad you enjoyed the fic!

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[info]luciblue
2006-03-23 03:35 am UTC (link)
Um, that anonymous comment was me, by the way. Forgot that I wasn't logged in.

You are fabulous.

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:50 pm UTC (link)
*mwah* Thanks for this :)

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[info]hsbfc
2006-03-23 03:59 am UTC (link)
I LOVED your story. I think it is great that Brian and Justin live on even though the show is over. Keep them coming. THEY ARE GREAT!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:51 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much! And yeah, I've got more fics on the way :)

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[info]teary_eyed2
2006-03-23 04:14 am UTC (link)
I'm about the only person who hasn't had some kind of horrid cold, flu or pneumonia on LJ but my sinuses are pretty allergy stuffed (hence my need for plenty of kleenex in addition to my weeping eye problem *winks*) so I loved your sick!fic anyway! :x

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:53 pm UTC (link)
Thanks teary! Yeah, this fic kinda applies to any snotty nosed experience :P

Hope your allergies clear up soon :)

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[info]tosca15
2006-03-23 04:21 am UTC (link)
Ethan, nothing you have ever written is pointless! Thank you!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:54 pm UTC (link)
Aw, thanks for this :)

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[info]mi_nion
2006-03-23 04:28 am UTC (link)
And, as predicted, we're both sick for the rest of the month.
oh that was too funny!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:56 pm UTC (link)
:D Thanks for letting me know you liked that last line... it took me forever to figure out how to finish this one, and that was the best I could come up with :P

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[info]besame_bj
2006-03-23 04:37 am UTC (link)
Oh, I love it! Brian and Justin living their lives--how perfectly wonderful! And seeing them in bed, sick, was a real kick. I love seeing something new from you, Ethan, and hope there will be more. You are *so* good with this stuff!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:58 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for this great comment! And yeah, I'm really hoping to finish up the next fic in a couple days, so there could be a new one along very soon. Thanks for the encouragement, it's much appreciated :)

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[info]sita_moonlight
2006-03-23 05:00 am UTC (link)
Awww. I loved that story. It made me feel a bit better (and since I happen to be kind of sick... :D)

Good job!

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[info]xhaleslowly
2006-03-25 07:59 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for this! And I hope you feel better soon :)

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